Writing Big and Trimming the Fat

Tuesday Teachings from the archives: I’ve been going back through the wonderful content on Writer…Interrupted and wanted to share the relevant teaching from past posts! Hope you enjoy this new Tuesday feature!- Gina

When I first began writing fiction, I was taught by one of my brilliant teachers to write BIG. (Which actually means big in word count.) He told us to plug in the research, to write lengthy descriptions, and just let the words flow. So that’s what I usually do.

When I finish, I step back and look at the novel as a whole. I consider what needs to stay and what can go. What this means is that when I’m finished

writing I usually end up cutting between 3,000 – 10,000 words. Sometimes the trimming happens in chunks. Sometimes it happens word for word.

If you have a complete novel that needs a little trimming, here are a few tips:

– Look at each chapter and scene to make sure it advances the story. In my last two novels I’ve cut whole chapters after I realized that they were nothing more than wonderful research. Yes, there was action, dialogue, etc. but I knew they had to go when I cut them and it didn’t change the plot. (Of course, usually I include these chapters when I send my manuscript in *hoping* my e
– I do “finds” on passive verbs and rewrite those sentences to make them tighter. ditor will see their brilliance. But usually he too agrees with the cut.)

–I also reread each scene to make it as tight as possible. It helps to remember each scene has a beginning (which draws you in), middle (action/reaction), and end (hook to keep you reading).

– I take out “saids” if it’s clear who’s talking. (You won’t believe how many words can be cut this way!)

– Make sure my scenes don’t start too soon or trail on too long.

– Cut out any descriptions of emotion. If it’s obvious from the text how the person feels, I don’t need to say it. (The reader should be crying from the drama of the scene not the words that state tears.)

Tricia Goyer is the author of thirty books including Songbird Under a German Moon, The Swiss Courier, and the mommy memoir, Blue Like Play Dough. She won Historical Novel of the Year in 2005 and 2006 from ACFW, and was honored with the Writer of the Year award from Mt. Hermon Writer's Conference in 2003. Tricia's book Life Interrupted was a finalist for the Gold Medallion in 2005. In addition to her novels, Tricia writes non-fiction books and magazine articles for publications like MomSense and Thriving Family. Tricia is a regular speaker at conventions and conferences, and has been a workshop presenter at the MOPS (Mothers of Preschoolers) International Conventions. She and her family make their home in Little Rock, Arkansas where they are part of the ministry of FamilyLifeTV.

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